http://internspills.blogspot.com/2010/02/why-does-publishing-book-take-so-long.html from the Intern
Wrong Genre from BookEnds, LLC - what this agent feedback means
The Manuscript Wearing Sunglasses and a Hat That Won't Give Its Name from Editorial Anonymous
Spend Your Social Time Wisely by Shelli Johannes-Wells at Elana Johnson's blog
How Convenient! - Contrived Coincidence from * Fiction Groupie *
All By Myself, Don't Wanna Be, All By Myself from The Other Side of the Story - It can be lonely being a protagonist.
Re-Write Wednesday: A Long Time Ago... also from The Other Side of the Story - about Flashbacks