I've reread Monsoon Rain, and other than it being far shorter than I'd planned, I'm very happy with it. Tomorrow I'll send it off to my beta reader and wait for her comments.
I probably should find a stronger name, unfortunately. Even though I think the name fits it perfectly, Monsoon Rain does not imply the fantasy genre.
I'm slowly catching up with 'real life' enough that I can start planning the next novel.